Akirasou:
Thanks for submitting your work to the IG gallery. =)
Erm, About your piece,
The background looks adequately okay, especially the clouds. Though the castle seems alittle too ‘plain’. Though good effort to make it straight and all, but you may want to give it a more interesting perspective to the castle, say…changing the to a ‘low angle shot’ (Google it if you’re not sure) of the castle instead. =)
Though one thing which seriously puzzles me is your character’s position. Nice sword and armor though, ^^ but the character’s pose is quite a ‘turn off’. Is there a strong significance to back up the character’s reason of having his back facing the audience? (If your say your character is ‘walking’ to somewhere, all the more it looks weird.)
Sorry for being harsh here, but to me, it’s like you ‘drew’ a character in your piece and yet, you ‘don’t want to express and show’ your character to the audience.
In short, your piece’s composition is ‘not there’, and more like a ‘candid’ shot of your character.
For this, you may want to study alittle on ‘the rule of thirds’ even though it’s more for photography, it helps alot in terms of composition. Take a look at more works from other artists involving characters as well neh. ^__^
All in all, i’d say good effort! ^____^!!
Keep drawing~!! =)
Arh well, having this position of *Back face viewers* was my intention, this work was from a block in my short manga strip, which I wish to emphasize on, and suppose to be a prologue for one of my stories. I rarely do fanart, and when I do, the characters will be facing the viewers, obviously.
To me, I dislike the background(Too plain) and Lance actually(Too monster hunter like).
Xin>> hai, i will find some day to scan it and some of the drawings i have already returned to them ><!! Therefore, i have not much drawings on hand now, sadly T^T
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August 16, 2008 at 4:23 am
xX_Desape_Xx
HAHA hi all . i am greg actually so amon i aint a pedo bear so stop putting it in ur posts next time zzz T_T
August 24, 2008 at 10:03 pm
Akirasou
Might as well start doing my part for the IG, here is some random artwork of my own character. Feel free to C&C.
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a47/Akiraliang/img039a.jpg
September 7, 2008 at 12:00 pm
jiemi
Akirasou:
Thanks for submitting your work to the IG gallery. =)
Erm, About your piece,
The background looks adequately okay, especially the clouds. Though the castle seems alittle too ‘plain’. Though good effort to make it straight and all, but you may want to give it a more interesting perspective to the castle, say…changing the to a ‘low angle shot’ (Google it if you’re not sure) of the castle instead. =)
Though one thing which seriously puzzles me is your character’s position. Nice sword and armor though, ^^ but the character’s pose is quite a ‘turn off’. Is there a strong significance to back up the character’s reason of having his back facing the audience? (If your say your character is ‘walking’ to somewhere, all the more it looks weird.)
Sorry for being harsh here, but to me, it’s like you ‘drew’ a character in your piece and yet, you ‘don’t want to express and show’ your character to the audience.
In short, your piece’s composition is ‘not there’, and more like a ‘candid’ shot of your character.
For this, you may want to study alittle on ‘the rule of thirds’ even though it’s more for photography, it helps alot in terms of composition. Take a look at more works from other artists involving characters as well neh. ^__^
All in all, i’d say good effort! ^____^!!
Keep drawing~!! =)
September 12, 2008 at 1:35 pm
Akirasou
Arh well, having this position of *Back face viewers* was my intention, this work was from a block in my short manga strip, which I wish to emphasize on, and suppose to be a prologue for one of my stories. I rarely do fanart, and when I do, the characters will be facing the viewers, obviously.
To me, I dislike the background(Too plain) and Lance actually(Too monster hunter like).
October 17, 2008 at 2:48 pm
Xin
Fish, aren’t you holding on to several pieces handed in to you before Comics IG was legit? I believe those works handed in deserve a spot here.
October 20, 2008 at 9:38 pm
Fish
Xin>> hai, i will find some day to scan it and some of the drawings i have already returned to them ><!! Therefore, i have not much drawings on hand now, sadly T^T
November 7, 2008 at 10:05 pm
Xin
Returned them? Well, I believe the junk I made is still with you then…? XD
December 1, 2008 at 4:05 pm
CH
pedo bear..haha
December 2, 2008 at 3:56 pm
Fish
CH >> huh?? why suddenly have pedo bear de..? >.>
December 26, 2008 at 1:02 am
collateralds
MOAR!
December 29, 2008 at 2:47 pm
rinamaya
adding slowly.. but -.- they forgot about me~ oh well =x
December 29, 2008 at 7:13 pm
rinamaya
Jiemi(Full of Juicy Epic Phailzness~ *i’m not kidding*) << no1 can beat my phail-ness =D
January 3, 2009 at 1:53 am
Fish
rinamaya >>> no one is phailz in this IG de ^^; everyone have their own ability =)
“Nobody can make you feel small in this world unless you did.”
April 27, 2009 at 12:03 am
Emms
mmm some of mine will appear here soon ^w^
May 4, 2009 at 10:12 pm
Xin
I do not haz a slot?
May 13, 2009 at 9:33 pm
Emms
Oh please… you not suppose to be part of the committee and stuff… you’re like… the super alumni member or something
May 14, 2009 at 6:38 pm
Xin
That sounds rather ridiculous… like G.W.Bush… I keed. I keeeeeeeeeed… Wait, what? There’s another ranking system for the Alumni?
June 20, 2009 at 5:02 pm
Emms
Nah I just made that up XD
May 14, 2009 at 10:27 pm
itsafishworld
no la =w=
Can also, if you want to post your pictures here =D
It is open to every one to share their drawings here~ ^^